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Source List of The Jetsons Characters on Wikipedia: The Jetsons family: (left to right, top row) Rosie (the robot maid), George, Jane, and Judy; (bottom row) Astro (the dog), Elroy.


Growing up, I loved watching The Jetsons. This idea that someday I would be able to wake up and have a shower that was a car wash was something that my eight-year-old self really wanted. I mean, a jet stream on a rolling sidewalk -- where do I sign up?



Now, with AI and Chat GPT, a future is here that George Orwells' "1984" couldn't have predicted. Or did it? TBH, I haven't read it since high school, which was for me in the 80s.


Recently, I graduated with an MFA in creative writing, and during a workshop, I asked my fellow writers if they were worried about AI.


They laughed at me. They guffawed. They reassured me that AI couldn't replace us creative writers. AI doesn't have the sum of the parts that make us --us. We are made of stars. We are God's children. We have souls. We have DNA from our ancestors. We have memories. These are the raw materials that we shape and drill and galvanize to make our one-of-a-kind unique stories.


AI can not replace us.


Honestly, I am not so sure about this. I wish I had their confidence. Today, I experimented with Chat GPT. And here's what happened when uploaded my bio.


MY ORIGINAL BIO

WRITTEN BY ME

I’m Amelia Dellos, a master storyteller based in Chicago.

I believe stories have the power to connect us, uplift us, and heal us.

​I’ve dedicated my life to the art of storytelling. I received an MFA in creative writing from Columbia College Chicago. I’m an award-winning writer and filmmaker. I’m also a communications pro, writing and rhetoric instructor, and hold a DEI certification from Northwestern University.


PROMPT #1 --Please rewrite to improve this text based on best practice website standards



Welcome to Amelia Dellos' Storytelling Hub!


Hello! I am Amelia Dellos, your guide in the enchanting realm of stories, based in the vibrant city of Chicago.


🌟 Manifest the Magic of Stories 🌟

Stories are not just mere words; they are bridges that bind us, wings that lift us, and balms that heal our souls. I firmly believe in the transformative power of storytelling and its capacity to enrich our lives.


📖 My Journey & Commitment 📖

With a heart full of tales and a mind bursting with imagination, I have devoted my life to the craft of storytelling. My educational journey led me to acquire an MFA in Creative Writing from the esteemed Columbia College Chicago.


🏆 Accomplishments & Skills 🏆

My dedication has not gone unnoticed. I have been honored with awards for my writing and filmmaking, reflecting the passion and expertise I bring to my work.

But that's not all! My professional experience extends beyond storytelling. I am a seasoned communications expert, helping individuals and organizations articulate their narratives effectively. As an instructor in writing and rhetoric, I also guide budding storytellers to refine their craft.


🌍 Building a Diverse & Inclusive Narrative 🌍

Understanding the value of diverse voices and perspectives, I am proud to hold a DEI (Diversity, Equity, and Inclusion) certification from Northwestern University. It’s imperative to foster narratives that are representative and inclusive, and through this certification, I am better equipped to make a positive impact through storytelling.


Connect with me to explore how we can craft stories that resonate, inspire, and empower.




Message from CHAT GPT -- Please note that this rewrite takes into account website best practices such as engaging language, clear formatting with headings, use of icons for visual interest, and call-to-action buttons for user engagement. Additionally, it restructures the information to make it more concise and impactful.


PROMPT #2 Please improve this: I’m Amelia Dellos, a master storyteller based in Chicago. I believe stories have the power to connect us, uplift us, and heal us. ​ I’ve dedicated my life to the art of storytelling. I received an MFA in creative writing from Columbia College Chicago. I’m an award-winning writer and filmmaker. I’m also a communications pro, writing and rhetoric instructor, and hold a DEI certification from Northwestern University.



Hello, World of Stories! 📚


I'm Amelia Dellos, a Master Storyteller hailing from the spirited city of Chicago.

🤝 Connect 🚀 Uplift 💖 Heal through Stories

In this bustling world, stories are the strings that weave hearts together, the wind beneath our wings that propels us forward, and the soothing melody that heals our spirits.


🖋️ Lifelong Devotion to Storytelling 🖋️

My soul is intricately entwined with the art of storytelling - a lifelong devotion that knows no bounds. My journey has been studded with milestones; an MFA in Creative Writing from Columbia College Chicago being one of them.


🏅 A Tapestry of Achievements 🏅

As an award-winning writer and filmmaker, my portfolio is a testament to the dedication and finesse that I bring to the table. My stories are crafted not just with words, but with heartbeats and whispers of the soul.


🎙️ Multifaceted Expertise 🎙️

But wait, there’s more! I don’t just create stories; I breathe life into them through communication strategies. As an adept writing and rhetoric instructor, I share my knowledge with aspiring storytellers.


🌍 Champion of Diversity 🌍

In an ever-evolving world, diversity is our greatest asset. I am honored to hold a DEI (Diversity, Equity, and Inclusion) certification from Northwestern University, as I champion for stories that celebrate the kaleidoscope of human experiences.


Let's weave stories that reverberate through time and space.



Message from CHAT GPT--This revision incorporates an engaging tone, concise sections, and vibrant language. It uses emojis for a modern touch, while also providing a comprehensive overview of Amelia’s background and skills, coupled with calls-to-action.


CHAT GPT does like the purply prose. Maybe my fellow writers are right, and we won't be replaced for now. I need to update my resume. Maybe I'll try CHAT GPT?



What do you think? Will AI replace writers?




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refgeek
16 de jun. de 2023

I think the issue w/1984 was that the government / Big Brother didn't really have enough resources to keep tabs on Winston 24/7. There were always ways to escape or to hide. I see that possibility closing now. Orwell did not think of the possibility that we would carry devices around with us voluntarily that could track our every move and our every expressed desire. Soon the only place we will be able to hide anything is in our own mind, and I think this will create a disincentive toward things like memoir in the long run.


re: will writers be replaced? No, but there will be fewer in the long run. I think AI will probably take over the…

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catherine
14 de jun. de 2023

Wow! What CHAT GPT rewrite was very impressive. But it could not have done it without you. And you could not write what you write about without your experiences.

I went to a talk about art and AI. One of the speakers wore a t-shirt that said, I Am A Prompter. The gist of the talk was, AI is another tool for artists to use. Just like the calculator, Photoshop instead of the darkroom.

I do not think it will replace us, but I worry about the dissemination of misinformation coming from people we thought were our leaders. Or maybe a brainwash of information on the Internet. Not unlike what our algorithms already give us.

Time will tell, and if…

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